• Victor@lemmy.world
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    7 months ago

    Your English is fine. Sentences may be a tad long, and of course an article this size would need a proofread before posting. That’s normal.

    Very interesting article, at least in the beginning. I didn’t get very far but I was intrigued from the start. I like how you framed it all the way you did. Well done. 🙂👍